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I spent too much time on this and the lines have gone soft. 
Her hands as well as some other points will be fixed as I render.
Edit: I'm going to scrap this and fix the larger mistakes before I get half way through and decide I don't like it as much as I want to.
Her hands as well as some other points will be fixed as I render.
Edit: I'm going to scrap this and fix the larger mistakes before I get half way through and decide I don't like it as much as I want to.
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hmmm, it's a good drawing, as always, you are so very talented, but...I hate saying this because I honestly don't like to be critical, ever, but...I can't say I much like it 
I don't really feel my character at all in it. If she's difficult for you I'm happy giving you someone else instead? I have lots of chars xD
I think it's the face that gets to me the most (I like that you seem to be going for a sassy look, but try and think "cute" sassy more so then mature sassy. If that makes sense? she looks too old here, she's meant to be very young-faced) , and the floral pattern on the top just seems odd, to me (she likes floral patterns on her pants, but solid pastels and soft colors for everything else. Also big poofy sleeves and hooded vests makes her happy [but those are not a requirement, haha].)
Maybe it's just cause it's a sketch and I'll like it more once it's a bit cleaned up (maybe just try taking the flowers off the top and attempt to make her look a little more youthful)?
Usually if it's just something small that seems off or something not necessarily important like a missing accessory or something I won't say anything because I'm just happy to be getting art, but...this just seems off on a few big points :< (which is understandable, you don't really know my character that intricately, so it's not hard to believe you may have trouble portraying her properly right off the bat.)
Anyway, I hope I didn't come off too harsh or mean, I honestly feel bad saying this (ask my friends, I sat staring at this comment for like 10 minutes afraid it might be too mean and uncertain if I should send it...), but I felt the need to because I want to be able to really enjoy the art you're doing for me and I know I wouldn't fully if I hadn't spoke up.
I don't really feel my character at all in it. If she's difficult for you I'm happy giving you someone else instead? I have lots of chars xD I think it's the face that gets to me the most (I like that you seem to be going for a sassy look, but try and think "cute" sassy more so then mature sassy. If that makes sense? she looks too old here, she's meant to be very young-faced) , and the floral pattern on the top just seems odd, to me (she likes floral patterns on her pants, but solid pastels and soft colors for everything else. Also big poofy sleeves and hooded vests makes her happy [but those are not a requirement, haha].)
Maybe it's just cause it's a sketch and I'll like it more once it's a bit cleaned up (maybe just try taking the flowers off the top and attempt to make her look a little more youthful)?
Usually if it's just something small that seems off or something not necessarily important like a missing accessory or something I won't say anything because I'm just happy to be getting art, but...this just seems off on a few big points :< (which is understandable, you don't really know my character that intricately, so it's not hard to believe you may have trouble portraying her properly right off the bat.)
Anyway, I hope I didn't come off too harsh or mean, I honestly feel bad saying this (ask my friends, I sat staring at this comment for like 10 minutes afraid it might be too mean and uncertain if I should send it...), but I felt the need to because I want to be able to really enjoy the art you're doing for me and I know I wouldn't fully if I hadn't spoke up.